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Guide to Writing a CritiqueGuide To Writing A Critique (Prose Edition) Writing is a special branch of art. Art is all about the visual, even with music and writing! However, the trick isn't in the flow of the paintbrush, but the flow of words. The picture must be described so that the reader can see the image with her mind, instead of her eyes. In this way, writing is a very tricky art and one is never done improving! Writers must help writers! When you write the critique, try to not be mundane and sound disinterested. You can even be engaging during critiques! Every thing you write is practice. Be encouraging, because you don't want to come offGuide to Writing a Critique
Jeremy's EscapeThe ManJeremy's Escape
A fog of panic clouds his eyes as his boots sink into the thick mud. His hands jet wildly into the fog; they search for a steady branch to grasp or a vine to pull. He can smell the withdrawing rain and taste the heavy air. The humidity has its sweaty fingers wrapped around his lungs. They clutch and grasp tighter with each heavy footstep, shaking and jerking his chest, making it impossible to take in any deep breaths. He begins to feel woozy, the once refreshing smell of the jungle makes his head spin. The smell is too sweet, and he is too hungry, tired, and hot. It smells like trees, fruit, grass, leaves, wet
Heaven's Not Heaven AnymoreHeaven was soaked in blood, the sky red and smoke-filled. The angels feuded, because of God and God's rules. Nothing was the way it was supposed to be. Could "Heaven" still be called "Heaven"? When that one desired and sacred domain was defiled and corrupted by the cries of brethren, heaven wasn't heaven anymore.Heaven's Not Heaven Anymore
Heaven wasn't supposed to smell revolting, with destruction filling every breath. Heaven was supposed to have blue skies and clean air. It was supposed to be the place that everyone yearned to escape to. As it was, Heaven was no better than Earth, with its qualms and secrets. Angels were not free to fly, without the fea
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